Dubby14's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[There She Is!! step3]

Nice

Fantastic, as usual! Glad that you're back and still kicken.

[naruto practice animation]

Nice

Well done, for a shorty.

[Today]

I like it

That was funny man, I wish it had been longer. Maybe the arrow to the boobs was a bit unnecessary, we all got that joke. Volume was a bit low, but you spoke the monologue very well. Keep it up!

[(Claycast) funny beeping]

Slow down dude

In my other review, I suggested that you focus more on your claymation rather than voice acting, sounds, and camera angles. Please take that to heart. Try some unique looking characters, light discipline, and giving us shots without dirty clothes in the background. Try this for your next one:
Some normal music in the background, and real focus on the claymation and what you can do with it. Standing a clay figure on his head and wiggling his arms around doesn't take too much effort, show us something else. Keep it up and keep working at it.

[Claycast)clayworld:H2O]

More effort please

There were a couple of funny quirks in there, I like the face zoom you did at the beginning. Perhaps find different voice actors, your voice was a bit high pitched. I'm thinking you should focus more on the actual claymation rather than voices, music, and camera angles. Keep it up, I'm anxious to see what you come up with in the future.

[The Metaphor]

Good poem

I like the poem and the music, it flowed. The animation, however, was lacking. Lets see you make more of the same genre, only with more effort in the anime.

Slim-Bean responds:

Thanks mate!

I know I need to work more on my animation skills, I reckon I will probably do a few practise runs before my next submission, I'm glad you liked everything else though!

[>>my first flash<<]

Hmmmm

Well done, that explosion at the end looked a bit choppy though.

[Aladdin 3150]

Holy crap

Why did it take me so long to see this? I mean, wow...this is honestly a concept that Disney would endorse LOL. Very smooth, phenomenal music, great story, and a deliciously evil twist at the end. Lets see if you win the Tank award, good luck!